Tuesday, March 8, 2011

I Might Just Call

I Might Just Call
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I come and go, return and leave
I know it’s so, do what I please.
One time, two times, three times it’s fine
Ask you to leave, next day you’re mine.

I knew it hurt so bad, I understood
Turned out far from what was good.
Time and time, kept coming back
You begged me, I cut some slack.

Like dominoes we fell, part by part
Till one day things just fell apart.
It felt so said, the pain it stayed
Was stupid, that need to get laid.

It pains a little, still does now
Wanting to go back, but how.
I’m afraid someday it’ll all be gone
Pitch-black night, no sign of dawn.

Memories, feelings, hopes and dreams
Echo in my head, those shrill screams.
I don’t want them to ever leave me
Just close my eyes and you I see.

I sound so down and so morose
Still have that shrivelled up rose.
I can’t make myself burn it all
I’m weak inside, I might just call.
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17 comments:

Shaurya said...

Ah always loved good poetry...
for me the best parts were..
"Like dominoes we fell, part by part
Till one day things we just fell apart."
"It pains a little, still does now
Wanting to go back, but how....."
woh im gonna post ur whole poem....seriously great poem...

hahaha the pic!

And yeah advnced happy b'day! have a blast! :D

era said...

hahaha...
nice nice..
especially the .."how cute is this!"...
and the poem ...i didnt quite understand...
maybe i need a second read!! :)

era said...

i got it !

Shaurya said...

Copied your poetry down into my mobile....Have to show it to my friend...
Haha wont take the credit...

Peevie Juice said...

thanks!

Anonymous said...

happy birthday!
that's a great poem.

Peevie Juice said...

Anonymous person show your face. because if you don't I'm gonna think it's The One that's texting. And I want to be sure.
Or maybe I don't. I don't know.

Peevie Juice said...

I said "texting". I meant "commenting.
Pardon me, I had so many sandwiches today.

PD said...

I can’t make myself burn it all
I’m weak inside, I might just call.

i love these lines
pretty cool.

Peevie Juice said...

Now who the fuck is PD?
And yes offense.

Leave your real name when you comment. PLEASE.

PD said...

Your name is 'peevie juice' on your blog. But I don't think it's your real name.
So why can't I call myself PD, and comment on random blogposts?

Peevie Juice said...

See. If you actually don't know me then you can call yourself Elvis for all I care.
But if you know who I am and my real name then please put your real name in the comments.
Specify if you are an unknown or someone I know.

PD said...

I don't know you.
I found your blog randomly.
Good job, though.

Peevie Juice said...

Now that we have established your identity, thank you so much for visiting!
Glad you like the blog. And I love it when people find my blog randomly.
Visit often!

Peevie Juice said...

I think I came across a bit too strong.

era said...

ralhi ...people like you (your blog)...RANDOM people ...HOW COOL IS THAT!!!
LIKE so hot-like-wow :P ;)

Peevie Juice said...

I'm awesome.
And shush, it's Peevie Juice here.